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Meagles, Penses and Beazers... by ~hairypackman:iconhairypackman:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Fixed


the tallest sray of a Meagle’s flay
is heard in Carperest Fowns
a Penses way with reagle clay
cannot keep his shrieving mown

with Penses and Meagles kept at bay
the Homelin can settle down
but with nothing else to lead away
the Limehon cannot be found

such is the way of the Beazer’s prey
the wish of not being found
but the Homelin isn’t led astray
and will bring that Beazer down

Meagles, Penses, Beazers and their prey
love the Limehon in the town
they hate the Homelin right to this day
for he wears the Human Crown
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Author's Comments

This is my first attempt at non-sense verse. A style that was mastered by very few but included the late Lewis Carol. Tell me what you guys think!

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*versebyverse Feb 20, 2009, 5:00:10 PM
Very interesting, and has a good feel to it as it is read. It makes you want to read it a few times to try and figure out just what you're talking about! Nice!
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~BlueWolfie666 Feb 20, 2009, 8:49:48 PM
For some odd reason I connect to this. O_o

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Starscream! You fool!~ Megatron
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~hairypackman Feb 20, 2009, 8:53:38 PM
That makes you a crazy person!

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James Pack
Writer. Artist. Psychopath.
http://www.hairypackman.com/ ~ Welcome to the Insanity!
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~hairypackman Feb 20, 2009, 8:54:16 PM
Thank you! I am very proud of this one.

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James Pack
Writer. Artist. Psychopath.
http://www.hairypackman.com/ ~ Welcome to the Insanity!
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~BlueWolfie666 Feb 20, 2009, 8:54:18 PM
Yes! XD

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Starscream! You fool!~ Megatron
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~hairypackman Feb 20, 2009, 9:00:21 PM
*applauds*

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James Pack
Writer. Artist. Psychopath.
http://www.hairypackman.com/ ~ Welcome to the Insanity!
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~BlueWolfie666 Feb 20, 2009, 9:01:45 PM
Thank you! Thank you! :bow:

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Starscream! You fool!~ Megatron
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~hairypackman Feb 21, 2009, 9:33:43 PM
:movingon:

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James Pack
Writer. Artist. Psychopath.
http://www.hairypackman.com/ ~ Welcome to the Insanity!
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~BlueWolfie666 Feb 21, 2009, 10:12:11 PM
Guessing it wasn't a complement

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Starscream! You fool!~ Megatron
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~hairypackman Feb 22, 2009, 4:31:44 AM
It's just time to move on!

--
James Pack
Writer. Artist. Psychopath.
http://www.hairypackman.com/ ~ Welcome to the Insanity!
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